Please provide feedback on Naomi if anything is wrong or needs fixing here and there... or if you just want to say hi and can't contact me elsewhere for some reason...
Hello, I would like to bring to you some concerns regarding Naomi and the amount of information she knows. While I know you are trying to play a smart character, I believe you are using OOC information that Naomi couldn't possibly know about and am bringing it to your attention in hopes that you can fix this in the future.
There's no shame in having a smart character admit that they don't know everything that's happening, and indeed that would be preferable to using out of character information in an in character manner. I hope you keep this in mind in the future.
Sorry if it seems that way, but for one, Naomi did have a log with a hefty turn up of people which she cataloged their different traits for later use and even went through the pamphlets the citizens were handing out. Though for some of the monsters, I can see how some of it can seem infomodding.
For the fourth god being released, the fact they're out and things haven't exactly gone south, it's a guess on her part.
As for the revival stuff, three people, yeah, its still a theory. And it's been on the network. She's confident and they've all said they're back, but it's something to test as she's stated several times. Still, you have to die for that to be tested and no one wants to really do that... I'm willing to plot that.
Anyway, as this all reasonably does come across as infomodding, I'll tone it down. Maybe say more 'in theory' or ask for more details about transformations such as she did in concerns to Gon and Killua.
I appreciate the reply. Asking for more details about transformations would be ideal, or even having her be incorrect about the monster if it's a shared trait between monsters from time to time.
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A few examples of this that I mean are the following: correctly guessing what a character is from vague traits more than once, stating that no one dies permanently and people come back in the fog despite the fact that there hadn't been enough time to say that this happense, and very few characters had announced their coming back to life over the network at the time the comment was posted.
An incredibly pressing example of your infomodding is Naomi stating that the fourth god was freed despite none of the characters involved publicly announcing this fact.
There's no shame in having a smart character admit that they don't know everything that's happening, and indeed that would be preferable to using out of character information in an in character manner. I hope you keep this in mind in the future.
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For the fourth god being released, the fact they're out and things haven't exactly gone south, it's a guess on her part.
As for the revival stuff, three people, yeah, its still a theory. And it's been on the network. She's confident and they've all said they're back, but it's something to test as she's stated several times. Still, you have to die for that to be tested and no one wants to really do that... I'm willing to plot that.
Anyway, as this all reasonably does come across as infomodding, I'll tone it down. Maybe say more 'in theory' or ask for more details about transformations such as she did in concerns to Gon and Killua.
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Cheers.